醫(yī)學(xué)醫(yī)藥論文英文摘要中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)例分析
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1、 原文:
Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1' XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology' Tongji Medical College' Huazhong University of Science and Technology' Wuhan 430030' China; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy' Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine' Wuhan 430061'China)ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueting liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled water' and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. The samples were determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm'λR=350nm). Result: The average recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38'0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion: The method is simple' convenient and available.KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid修正:Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1' XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2' Tongji Medical College' Huazhong University of Science and Technology' Wuhan 430030' China;
2.The Faculty of Pharmacy' Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine' Wuhan 30061'China)Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueting oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in distilled water' and then xtracted (into the sample刪去) with water-saturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples were subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning λS=280nm'λR=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%'(and刪去)RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 (five刪去) batches of samples were 0.38'0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method is simple' convenient and feasible.
KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic acid